A survey by the Perception Institute asked black and white women to score their attitudes towards different hair types out of 5—with 5 being the most positive.
Perception Institute 的一项调查要求黑人和白人女性对她们对不同发型的态度打分,满分 5 分——5 分表示最积极。
Arsenal, sitting at the top of the Premier League when this research paper was published, have scored 13 goals from corners out of a season total of 70.
So overall the essay is well-organized and make solid points but given the word choice and unclear connections of ideas, especially in the fourth paragraph, this essay would receive a score of four out of five.